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深圳自学考试英语二短文写作技巧五

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深圳自考大学为大家介绍深圳自学看考试英语二短文写作技巧五,希望对各位考生有所帮助!

(四)评论型作文

1. 写作模式:引出需要评论的话(一定要直接或间接引用原话)-分析该引语的内涵-我的观点(可以适当引用名人名言或谚语,最好照应开头部分)

2. 常用句型:

(1)引述的句式
As a proverb goes, "…"
An old saying goes like this, "…"
Lincoln once remarked, "…"

(2)分析引语的句式
From this saying, we can see / know / conclude that…
This saying / statement tells us / reveals / shows / points out that …

3. 例文
Directions: For this part. You are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay
entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln's famous remark,
"Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four
sharpening the axe." You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200
words.
Sample writing:
The Way to Success
Abraham Lincoln once observed, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I
will spend the first four sharpening the axe." As far as I'm concerned, this
remark can be interpreted as follows: If you want to successfully achieve a
certain goal, you must be well prepared for it at first. A good preparation
involves sufficient learning, good strategies and a healthy mentality.
To be well prepared, you must first equip yourself with the required knowledge
and skills. Only in this way can you move smoothly in all kinds of tough and
complex situations. In the process of preparation, you will formulate good
strategies which can contribute to reducing the potential mistakes, thus leading
to higher efficiency. Finally, you must learn to cultivate a healthy mentality.
You must be fully prepared for the possible setbacks you may encounter and
devote yourself wholeheartedly to whatever goal you pursue.
In a word, success comes to those who are well prepared for it. The way to get
prepared is also a way to improve yourself. By sparing no effort to "sharpen
your axe", you will successfully arrive at your destination. (189 words)

请认真答题,答题结果将记入知识点测评的成绩!
【单选题】Choose the most suitable opening sentences for the

following passage.The following is a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds
Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, "Quitting smoking is
the easiest thing in the world. I've done it hundreds of times". Choose the most
suitable opening remarks for the essay.____________________________. There is
something provoking and interesting in this paradox, which sets us thinking
about how to achieve success.Modern society provides people with more
opportunities than before, and there are stories which tell us the possibility
of somebody getting successful overnight. Actually that is not the case. Before
these people become successful, a lot of hard work has been done. Take super
girl Zhang Liangying as an example, before she became famous, she used to spend
day and night practice her singing. With her strong will and painstaking
efforts, she finally made it and now she is a world-famous singer. What we
usually see is the result, but what we ignore is a long process of struggling
forward and overcoming various obstacles. Take "quitting smoking" for example,
which is, to most people, a difficult task, so people always give up the idea
for they don't have the strong will.In a nutshell, strong will is an
indispensable part of success. Strong will is the best policy to make your
dreams come true. Concentrate on what you are engaged in, persist in there and
be patient, for "Where there is a will, there is a way".
A. Some humorous 
saying goes like this, "Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.
  I've done it hundreds of times". Quitting smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved.

B. There is a humorous saying about quitting smoking,
which means quitting smoking is both easy and difficult.

C. What do you think 
about quitting smoking? Is it very difficult or very easy? If you are in the
  former group, then you are right.

D. Everybody wants to give up smoking, but 
how? How can well quit smoking successfully?
【答案】A

【解析】本题考查评论型作文的开头写法。评论型作文的开头部分需要直接或间接引用原话,最好直接引用,只有A做到了这一点。B,C和D都没有引用需要评论的话,而且和下文不能起到很好的衔接关系,下句中的this
paradox显然指的是需要评论的话语,故选择A。
【知识点】评论型作文



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